What you didnt say.

 

“Good writing does not succeed or fail on the strength of its ability to persuade. It succeeds or fails on the strength of its ability to engage you, to make you think, to give you a glimpse into someone elses head. ” — Malcolm Gladwell

Only you can tell me if Ive succeeded or failed. And I would really like to know and improve. Youre feedback means a lot.

So, what do you think?